Talk:ISES2009 Poster Abstract: Exposure of Finnish subpopulations to fine particles due domestic wood combustion

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Comments on the abstract

Some food for thought:

  1. The very main findings could be brought up a bit more
    • increase in exposure according to level of education
    • young adults highest exposed
      • shows also in the exposure categorization
  2. Methods could also be described a bit more briefly if more space for other text is needed
  3. Some more consideration on the possible explanations behind the findings would be interesting
  4. Also consideration on the meaning of the observed difference would be interesting
    • what is the effect of a 0,10 µg/m3 difference (max-min educational level groups) on average exposure to wood combustion PM2.5?
  5. Not sure if PM2.5 (NOTE: PM, not PPM) needs to be explained in this context (→ if space is tight, leave out the explanation)

Some language hints:

  • due to something
  • exposure to something
  • check the use of plurals
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